Everyone can use 8 sentences per post. And we are making a story about Natalia BoaVista and Ryan Wolfe in a case. I will start <33/
Hope this topic will get a lot of posts!
Natalia was sitting on her chair looking at some evidence, it was a black suite with white stripes on it. The black suite belongs to a guy named Dean LaMathew. He is 29 years old and is a suspect in the case of Laury LaMathew. Laury was found in the car of D. LaMathew and she was wearing this black suite with blood on it, but not her blood. It's Natalia job to find out who lost this blood, but she couldn't find anything on the computer.
Great idea! I love love looovvveee to write I'm like a writing addict, but I don't see myself as an author later in life.
Natalia was frustrated by the lack of a DNA match in CODIS and was about to to go tell Ryan the result when he walked right through the door, a pleasant smile resided on his face. Natalia's face instantly lit up at the sight. "Hey, Natalia, did you get any hits on the blood from the suit?" he asked hopefully. Her smile faultering she said, "sorry, Ryan, there wasn't a match in CODIS and I couldn't match it to any of the suspects." Natalia hated letitng Ryan down, his disapointement evident in his face. "Ok, well, I'm going to go tell H. See ya Natalia," his smile returning to his face. Natalia sighed longingly as Ryan left DNA. She just didn't know how to tell him the truth about her feelings.
Sorry, that might be 9 sentences... I just had to get that last one out lol
-- Edited by Livdances3477 on Saturday 28th of August 2010 10:22:40 AM
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The first 7 chapters are already done and published. My username over on FF is EvaRoseTogo lol Now I'm kind of embarassed lol I've never told a soul that I write on FF much less tell them who I am on there lol... and now here I am putting it on the internet... wooowww I have issues lol
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But.. It's so sad for Natalia. // Stupid, stupid, STUPID NICK. I hate that guy. But I love Ryan. He is sooo lovely for Natalia. They are sooo cute together. aaaawh.
Awww thank you I'm glad you like it Sorry I haven't updated in a few days I've been loaded with school work over the weekend and the past week. I'm in the middle of chapter eight though but now it's a bit difficult since I stabbed my hand with a pencil and can barely move my left hand lol
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Now I've been sick for the past 2 days and I'm still sick along with a sore hand... Life just has it in for me lol. I'll try to update as soon as possible. And hopefully things will turn for the better for Natalia Lol I don't even know what's going to happen. Just whatever happens when I decide to type it lol
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"Speaking words of wisdom, let it be." -The Beatles "Let It Be"
I love love looovvveee to write
And yes, my hand really really hurts lol
